Hey, my name is Charlie. I have a deep passion for writing stories. I live in Australia so if some of the words are spelt differently that would be why. I have always loved to read and listening to and playing and making music. I used to be a dancer until i went through a phase of depression.
When i read i can live another life and forget about the one i'm living so it's always good to do. When i get to make those lives through the stories i write it makes me feel so happy that i can give someone else a chance to live a different life even for a little while.
I also love super heroes and comic books ( blame my dad, he introduced me into that world) so my main story at the moment is about superheroes. If there is anything that is the same as another comic or story you've read, it's a coincidence. I hate it when people copy stories. I do take inspiration from others though, so i try hard to make it my own and shake it up so that its not the same.
So what this blog is all about is stories that i write so that way every person has something to read. I hope you enjoy my stories.
Please keep in mind that i don't want to hear hateful comments because it can be really depressing. And just make sure theres nothing rude racist or discriminating to anybody. And please be sure that you put up some interesting story ideas.
I don't get the start of this story. I think you need to do another story explaining how they became superheroes and how they built their team and what happened between the members and about Lachlan and cassie's relationship and explain more about why they broke up.
ReplyDeleteOtherwise it was really good. You have a talent
Hope this helped a bit :)